When I woke up I woke up and felt like a tigger just finishing its pray lazy, tierd, and sleepy but I knew I had to get up I acktid like a old man would doI slowly sat upandagot out of bed I walked to the bathroom and brushed my teeth round and round I brushed .
I walked to the toilit like a mummy Isawn my breakfast on the tabel I glazed my eyes on the scrambeld eggs and baycon I ate it like I HAD ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD THEN I thought uniform I
awesomw writing Siatleki just a little mistakes but it is great writing
ReplyDeleteits good but make shure it makes sence before u
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awsome storys and like the
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nice writing but need to work on your spelling and
ReplyDeletemake sure you make your sentences right befor pubblish
wow done for using hocks and good active work
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ReplyDeleteGood story you need to work on spelling
ReplyDeletelike your story
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your funny when i woke up i woke up
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