My plan by Zane,Jerome

Title: The abandoned mine
Story type horror:
Ccharacters: Zack,Cody,Candice,Bart,Amanda,Jack
Setting: In an old abandoned mine with bats and
man eating people in a cave
Main problem: Zombies and man eating
people start shooting arrows and rocks in sling shot at jack
Action and outcome:Zack macks the distraction while Bart is shooting the people with rocks
and old arrows that they found on the way to the mine and a home made sling shot in the
bush when Bart was shooting the people amanda and candice whet to save jack
And cody stayed back to kill the man eating people

story writting plan

Tittle: C.S.I most wanted
Story type: Horror
Characters: Tara, Arnold, Betty
Setting: Forest in an unknown planet
Main problem: Tara is a little girl that is adopted by a family and likes
to kill children her age, but her mum and dad thinks shes just a
sweet little girl
Action and Outcome: The family gets a phone call from a man name
Dr iroh in Canada saying that tara was on an most wanted paper in canada
but tara flew from canada

hunted house by katie

CRIP CLAP the sound of the ground.

Narrative planning by Lee and David

Type of story: Horror
 Title: Butterflesh on Walter street
Characters: felo Butterfly. Jojo the nine year old girl. chief martin the chief of the police station at Walter street.A man called john. A scientist called harry that helps the police.
Setting: A place called Walter street 
Main Problem: A butterfly called the Felo butterfly flys around and bites people through the night the skin starts to peel of and then a swarm of butterfly's sweep them up and leaves the next day the person kills himself and the police along with scientists have to stop the breeding of these butterflys.
Action Outcome: The scientist think that they got rid of the breeding of the Felo butterfly but then when no one was around the street and somewhere else a bush wiggles then the butterfly comes out of the bush the butterfy flys inside a house a the next morning you here a scream.

hollidays sitaleki

in my holliday I had a great time sleeping at my sisters house I got to play enternet all day and I went golfing with my brother in law I was waisted by my brother in law I mean well I was there I got a hair cut  and I was showerd with gifts by one person my  sisters

my holiday by hayley

In the holidays me and my aunty droped me off to  my mums house.we had pizza from pizza hut then we went to a birthday and it was my nanas 70th birthday I was wereing my skinny jeans and a plain white t-shirt and a awsome karigen for dinner i had fried rice I gave my preasant to my nana the preasant was a box of chocolate and flowers with a card

My holiday by stevie

In my holiday i did nothing at all but the only thing i was doing was creating an animation with the Lego.
the next day my brother,sister and i walked all the way to my Nana's house and over there i played rise and fall because i had nothing else to do. on the last day of the holidays i wasn't very surprise about school, i was running out of time i spent all time getting ready for the last term. the end

My holiday by marist

In the first week of the holiday me and my big brother had an camp at this man house for two days               

My holiday by Amelia

In my holidays my uncle hired the chipmunk from 6 o'clock till 9 o'clock pm.The next day my sister and i went shopping for cloths.We went jay jays,surpre and Vallie girl.the next day my aunt gave birth to my baby cousin.


that is the end of my story.

holiday highlights by katie

My holiday was a fun holiday.where was my holiday lets say it was at (SKIDS). It was fun i saw some of my mates there that were at bairds mainfreight.My favourite part was either the movies or the trip to kelly taltons.The movie we watched was cats and dogs it was so so so so so so BORING. One of my friends was levi. Him and his mates were sitting on the floor.THE MOVIE WAS a 3D movie.

Kelly toltons

one ather trip we went to was kelly toltones. The best thing was the big big car ride is was smelley a little but it was fun.The best thing of all was the penguin that was sitting on a little white egg.

so thats what i got up to in the holidays so SKIDS was cool but the trips were my favourite.......

My holiday by zane

In the holidays the first week I cut my hair and helped my dad all week.
Then the next week of the holidays I went over to my papas,aunties and uncles house for the
holidays I was excited then I played pool table all day every day on Thursday that week we all went to
the beach and pools and we had a pic-nick and then went back home the end 

my hollidays jerome

In my hollidays me and my family went to the golf ranger at manukau to have a golfing compitition and my dad smashed the golf  ball and hit a car.

My holiday by Kasinga

My Holiday was the best holiday for this year because we went shopping with my sister and it was my uncle,my sister and my cousins birthday in a row.My brother and i got to go to rainsbow end.It was so so so so cool because when i was driving a bumper car i bumped into every one.

that was the best holiday ever.