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Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Going to school by olympic
Ring ring,ring ring all I could hear is my alarm and a loud WAKE UP as I got of my fluffy blanket I could feel a strong brezze make me want to jump back in my cozzy blanket but I had to get up stomp stomp stomp as I went to the bath and a cold icey water hit my face and a minty tooth paste in my mouth, as I ran to get my clothes I could hear a big snore and as quick as the speed of sound I started to creep as I went to get my clothes I could also hear a "move im doing my hair " "shut up dads sleeping you fat ugly poo" as I buttoned my t shirt and put on my pants I could not wait to go school I was like a lion who cant wait to eat is prey, as I joged to school I could hear the sound of kids playing and I knew I was going to have a good day
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I am loving it OLYMPIC.i love how you showed rather than tell.AWESOME WRITING
ReplyDeleteit was good but you have to check your spelling
ReplyDeleteI like the begining and you got some awsome similies
ReplyDeleteGood story i like your showing rater than telling AWESOME WRITING
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